Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university.
Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.
Give reasons and include relevant examples. 250 words.
IELTS essay sample for academic writing task 2 practice.
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Working for a while after school and before going to university is a great way to acquire some practical skills and extra cash. Many students rely on their own funds to finance higher education and this could be a pathway. There are many benefits of taking up a job before starting to attend a university. There could be a few disadvantages too.
The benefits of employment go beyond mere financial gain and work experience. Jobs teach real life skills such as working with other people, managing time and handling money in a business. It prepares a person for the future. Socially, this could be a time when most young people make lasting friendships too. For some people it could very well be a necessity to earn to pay for a college degree.
There are a few drawbacks. Students could use their time to study further and get more academic qualifications. Between school and university may not be the best time to begin a career or get involved in the vicious cycle of life, they have their entire life to work. The biggest drawback is that work could become a huge distraction and chances of continuing to work is far greater than if they don’t take up a job.
On the whole, the benefits of working between school an college far outweigh the disadvantages. Working or taking up a job can never be bad. There is more to learn than to lose. Students must be encouraged to find jobs for a while before beginning to study at a university.
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Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university. Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people.
Introduction must state your position.
Do not write “some suggest” again in the intro, start with the phrase, “young people should take up a job” = youngsters find some work and do a job after school.
Find some work = take up a job
step one – Why do youngsters work between school and the university?
answer to this question can follow the introduction.
step two – What are the advantages and disadvantages? List them and state if there are more advantages than disadvantages.
step three – give examples of advantages and disadvantages
step four – write a conclusion – explain why there are more benefits than drawbacks.